This is the second rough cut for the documentary. I feel that this is a very big improvement to the first rough cut, but there are still a few things that need to be fixed.
These are the things that I feel still need improving...
- There is no sound on the Nick and the Level 2 student's interview videos, there is just music.
- The music stops at the beginning of Pete's interview and then starts again during the middle of the interview, this happens twice in the Pete's interview and then once again in Gary's interview, the music either needs to stop throughout the interview or continue throughout the interview.
- The interview with the man from Bournemouth University cuts from one stop of the interview to another, I think this would be better if it had a cut of other footage in between to get rid of the jump in the interview footage.
- Finally there is no footage of James' interview or music video in the documentary.
Though there are a lot of improvements that have been made following the pervious feedback from the MA student's Bournemouth University.
- There is an added an intro at the beginning to get the audience's attention.
- There are no longer any random black parts.
- There are no black screens with white text saying who's being interviewed, now there is white text at the bottom of the screen at the beginning of each interview with the person's name and job.
- The editing footage has been broken up a lot more and interlaced with more footage of the interview with Pete.
- And it is now the correct length that the documentary should be, it is 8 minutes and the target was 6-10 minutes.
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